TelePresence First Draft Complete

[mabfan]

Friends:

I'm pleased to note that this morning, with the exception of the movie titles, I managed to finish the first draft of TelePresence.

Unfortunately, I have to mail it to Analog tomorrow, as I'm working on deadline. I've managed to send copies to a few first readers whose opinions I trust very highly. Also, gnomi is going over it as well, and I've done one pass through a hard copy and already found a lot of stuff to change.

If anyone else has the time to go over it tonight, and would like me to send them a copy of the first draft, let me know. However, if you decide you won't be able to give me comments until after, say, 8 AM EDT on 29 September 2004, then please refrain from doing so. I don't want to read all about the story's problems after it's already in the mail. :-)

Comments

[magid.livejournal.com]

I could fit it in tonight (she says having not started her cooking. what's just one more thing? ;-).

[lisafeld.livejournal.com]

Just sent it off to you, hope it helps and is timely...

[mabfan.livejournal.com]

I mistyped my post...

Thanks for your comments! Most helpful.

[arib.livejournal.com]

If'n you send it to me soon, I can give it a look before morning.

[vettecat.livejournal.com]

I imagine it's too late to offer now... sorry! Maybe next time.

[fynixsoul.livejournal.com]

This is what I get for not checking lj for three days--missed oppertunities.

Oh well. Congratulations on getting it done!